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[新词求曲] 新词!望老师批评,指点!求曲!! |
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你发的几首词都看了,词句很规整,优美,但感到意境太深奥了,作为歌词,一般简单明了,通俗易懂为上,而不是去玩玄虚深奥,句式段适合谱曲,个见,仅作交流,问好
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