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繁忙之中填了一首昂扬先向上的歌词，不知道妥否？请指正。<br/><br/>&nbsp;<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-INDENT: 18.05pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0; mso-char-indent-size: 18.05pt;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">红</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
                        </span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">旗</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
                        </span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">颂</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">童</span>
                <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">童</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">锦绣山川洒满春光，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">辽阔大地春风荡漾。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一轮太阳从东方升起，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五星红旗迎风飘扬。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年轻的胸膛心花怒放，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">描绘未来描绘希望。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">啊，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五星映红了天空，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红旗指引着方向。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红旗下我幸福成长，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">热爱祖国无尚荣光。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">美好生活蒸蒸日上，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">远大前程灿烂辉煌。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">亿万人民意气风发，</

<p>不得不承认，赞颂祖国的歌是没有人听的。<br/></p><p><font face="Verdana">《枫叶又落》</font></p><p><font face="Verdana">枫叶又落<br/>我被淹没<br/>寂寞突袭了笑容</font></p><p><font face="Verdana">萧瑟深秋<br/>寂寥美丽了平和<br/>枫叶孤落是岁月 笑回眸<br/></font></p><p><font face="Verdana"><br/>历经坎坷后只是牵了他的手<br/>一辈子情愿陪他这样度过<br/><br/>当枫叶再次飘落<br/>往日岁月又上心头<br/>感动早已封了我的口<br/>未来也在 笑着劝说（让我沉默）<br/>（劝说着让我沉默）</font></p><p><font face="Verdana"><br/>美丽黄昏&nbsp; 染上我的颜色<br/>金黄了枫叶金黄了整个秋<br/><br/>（有一段的两个括号里的话，选适合的其一，请多多指点）</font></p>

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<p><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">欢迎童童</font></strong>和<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">灵翅蝠朋友光临哟!欣赏中!!!</font></strong></p>

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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>童童</i>在2006-9-24 11:55:00的发言：</b><br/>繁忙之中填了一首昂扬先向上的歌词，不知道妥否？请指正。<br/><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">红<span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">旗<span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">颂</span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span></b></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">童</span>&nbsp;<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">童</span><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">锦绣山川洒满春光，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">辽阔大地春风荡漾。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一轮太阳从东方升起，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五星红旗迎风飘扬。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年轻的胸膛心花怒放，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">描绘未来描绘希望。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">啊，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五星映红了天空，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红旗指引着方向。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红旗下我幸福成长，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">热爱祖国无尚荣光。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">美好生活蒸蒸日上，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">远大前程灿烂辉煌。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">亿万人民意气风发，</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五星红旗闪烁光芒。</span></p

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>灵翅蝠</i>在2006-9-24 14:58:00的发言：</b><br/><p>不得不承认，赞颂祖国的歌是没有人听的。<br/></p><p><font face="Verdana">《枫叶又落》</font></p><p><font face="Verdana">枫叶又落<br/>我被淹没<br/>寂寞突袭了笑容</font></p><p><font face="Verdana">萧瑟深秋<br/>寂寥美丽了平和<br/>枫叶孤落是岁月 笑回眸<br/></font></p><p><font face="Verdana"><br/>历经坎坷后只是牵了他的手<br/>一辈子情愿陪他这样度过<br/><br/>当枫叶再次飘落<br/>往日岁月又上心头<br/>感动早已封了我的口<br/>未来也在 笑着劝说（让我沉默）<br/>（劝说着让我沉默）</font></p><p><font face="Verdana"><br/>美丽黄昏&nbsp; 染上我的颜色<br/>金黄了枫叶金黄了整个秋<br/><br/>（有一段的两个括号里的话，选适合的其一，请多多指点）</font></p><br/></div><p>不得不说,<strong><em>灵翅蝠朋友没有理解曲意,词与曲在内容上还有距离.</em></strong></p>

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